Which of the following would be a good revision for the sentence below? Keep in mind the focus on active verbs.

Around the house, Aaron is called "small fry" by his big brother.

A. "Small fry" is what Aaron is called by his big brother.

B. When Aaron is hanging out at the house, he is called "small fry" by his brother

C. A long time ago, Aaron's big brother was called "small fry" too.

D. Aaron's big brother calls him "small fry" when they are hanging out at home.

The tankers are so large how did some crew members get from one point to another while on board

Which sentence best build the suspense

Millicent sat down at her desk in the big study hall. tomorrow she would come to school, proudly, laughingly, without lipstick, with her brown hair straight and shoulder length, and then everybody would know, even the boys would know, that she was one of the elect. teachers would smile , thinking perhaps: so now they've picked millicent arnold. i never would have guessed it. —"initiation," sylvia plath what inference can be made about millicent from the way she is characterized indirectly? millicent is a student with straight brown hair. millicent does not usually take care of her appearance. millicent has not always been popular.