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Alittle later than his thisbe had, and he could see what surely were the tracks of a wild beast left clearly on deep dust. his face grew ashen. and when he had found the bloodstained shawl, he cried: "now this same night will see two lovers lose their lives: she was the one more worthy of long life: it's i who bear the guilt for this. which statement best describes how the order of events creates tension?

Statistics show that internet usage in the united states has grown from just 41% of households in 2000 to 77% of households in 2010. which of the following best describes how online shopping has added to cultural diffusion in the united states? it encourages people to purchase more than they normally would. it makes news and information about products available in an easy-to-consume format. it has allowed large corporations to expand into new states, creating more jobs. it makes goods more accessible to people who might not normally be able to get them.

In your own honest opinion, what are your views on same-sex relationships/marriage? be sure to include at least 2-3 paragraphs with correct spelling and appropriate language. be sure to explain why you feel/think the way you do about this particular topic. support your answer with supporting details.(for anyone that answers do not hate on anyone's answer, we all have our own point of views and opinions)