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I was only 3 years old, but I still remember how I felt on that day so long ago; I can still see how it all looked to me. My parents had taken us to the museum with them. They had been planning this outing for days and it was a special occasion. I remember mom wore a blue dress and my father had on a suit. My sister and I wore matching dresses and we had on our patent leather shoes.

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I was only 3 years old, but I still remember how I felt on that day so long ago; I can still see how it all looked to me. My parents had taken us to the museum with them. They had been planning this outing for days and it was a special occasion. I remember mom wore a blue dress and my father had on a suit. My sister and I wore matching dresses and we had on our patent leather shoes.

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the mending wall was written by robert frost

"the tune the he might never know again." this part build anticipation. dexter got extremely happy by the piano tune. he could see what he was living at that moment in his life throught this feeling. the reader might want to learn more about his happy life. in fact, he called it a state of   'ecstasy'. the fact that he had got in a mood of intense appreciation and that everything about him was extremely bright and glamorous might lead the reader to feel that this state of happiness may not last long. the two parts from the excerpt that exemplify the anticipation are: " the sound of the "; " it was a know again."