Hello, I had a work, but I've to reduce because I'd to do 120 words, can you help me to reduce ?
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First, I would like to thank the organisers of this wonderful evening, also you for your presence and interest.
Though, who would be disinterested? Who has not fantasized about coming one day face to face with a Martian? Well, ladies and gentlemen, tonight, your dream has come true! Except you may be disappointed this incredible adventure did not turn us into little green creatures ...
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You should be able to go past 120 words

One time I had to write a 300 word essay and I did 500 and they accepted it I also got a A

Explanation:

Hope this helps

Also they could give you extra credit for extra words

give the other person a brainliest please

Explanation:

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.