When you walk into a room filled with people you have never met, how do you think they see you? How do you want to be seen when you first meet people? Describe what your first impression on people tends to be. one paragraph pleasee thank u:)

When I walk into a room, I want to be noticed. I want people to see me as an easy-going comedic guy. So I'd usually crack a joke to ease the tension. I want people to feel comfortable around me, which would then make me comfortable around them. Also, who doesn't like a Joker?

Explanation:

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.