Dozens of people jostled their way into the crowd theater as Dana and Eliza stood obediently at the end of the line. eliza wished they would have arrived earlier. Dana told her to relax and that everyone would eventually manage to get in. Eliza remembered that the play would not start for another 15 minutes abd comforted herself by thinking about how much she was looking forward to doing it. Which revision should be made to correct a vague pronoun?
O 1. Change "they" to "she and Dana" in sentence 2.
02. Change "her" to "Eliza" in sentence 3.
03. Change "everyone" to "dozens of people" in sentence 3.
04. Change "it" to "the play" in sentence 4.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

that’s a nice boss :