Read this conclusion of an argumentative essay. Our national parks are special. Most people know that, but there are a few who still have not gotten the memo. Those individuals need to understand that there are a lot of benefits we get by taking care of those places. They need to get out of their houses and take a few vacations in those parks. Catch sight of some deer or some wolves or some bears. Go camping and pick some wildflowers. Pretty soon they will see how much better nature is than their television set.

This conclusion could be more successful if the writer revised by

adding a new claim and generating good reasons.
adding more reasons and credible sources.
adding more transitions and creating a more respectful tone.
adding more evidence and a few more transitions

i don't really know the circumstances. i personally think not due to it not being fair for all parties and how hated i'd become if i thought it was a good thing.

i believe that dan is so anxious because he dose not know what awaits him when he gets there. but i dont know to be honest

at the beginning of the story, elisa just has the small idea of wanting more attention, but as the story progressed, her desire for more attention grew larger. before she talked to the man with the wagon she was just focused on her chrysanthemums but when she talked to him and got some attention she enjoyed it, so she decided to get all dolled up for henry. but when they were on the way to dinner she was so upset because she saw the flowers on the side of the road and realized the man didn't take interest in her like she thought.