I'm sorry if im asking for too much but can someone help me in the introduction for my essay. It is an argumentative essay in which we have to say wether making mistakes is a good or bad thing. all I need help on is the hook, claim, thesis. PLEASE

You may be thinking to yourself, making mistakes are a bad thing, they really make you ruin things, i panic and i panic. I once made a mistake, i stepped in mud with my new white vans oh no i ruined them, i just bought them, it’s the end of the world!! what will my mom think when she sees them? will people at school judge me? Well, that’s what you think. In reality, mistakes arent as bad as you think, you overthink and make a bigger deal out of it than it really it. Mistakes are something you can learn from, you know what to do in that situation if it were to happen again, they help you grow and improve yourself. Just so then, I went home and my mom seen my muddy vans, I started hyperventilating. But then, she looked at me and told me I made a mistake and that’s okay, and now I know to never wear white vans when it’s muddy outside, or to walk around the mud. That mistake helped me realize good things. I’m so glad I made that mistake because now I have a chance to realize that I will be okay in the end. I have made progress, not failure. Mistakes are good, they help you learn from things. They make you realize stuff, and help you improve your character. You may think mistakes are awful, but after that mistake, you know what and what not to do, even if you make that same mistake against, it’s okay to learn from things.

SO SO SORRY IF THIS IS BAD, I RUSHED AND I INCLUDED EXAMPLES!!

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