Barbara wants to add one of the following sentences to her story. Which version of the sentence is the most descriptive? A.
There were a lot of fish in the water, and Abigail could not stop herself from admiring all of them as they swam along to their destination.
B.
Thinking about all that she had to do, Abigail decided to take a break in her walk along the creek to admire the tons of fish silently swimming in the water next to her.
C.
Abigail kneeled and looked down at the water in the creek; it was so clear she could see the fish, the rocks, and the plants on the bottom.
D.
The gushing creek's water, pure and clear, allowed Abigail to observe the traveling school of sockeye salmon, gracefully gliding along in peaceful companionship.

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report