Rewrite this to be longer. Prices do not represent the value of a gift, instead what makes it significant are the intentions of the person giving you the gift, and the action of thinking about you.

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Explanation:

Prices do not represent the value of a gift, instead of what makes it really nice and significant  are the intensions of a person giving you a gift and being very thoughtful and thinking about you.

Is that good?

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

"b"

hine was able to receive a high school and college education.