A. The vivid description is not effective because the bland and ordinary words detract from the importance of the events in the story. B. The vivid description is effective because it appeals to the sense of smell as well as the sense of sight and hearing.

C. The vivid description was not effective because it creates a laidback tone, when Jennas feeling of Anticipation call for an energetic tone.

D. The vivid description is effective, because the passages uses powerful images to show Jenna‘s awareness of time.