Correct the given example of each of the following writing convention errors by writing a new sentence that avoids the error. Additionally, for EACH writing convention write 2 original examples of that error, and then correct each of those 2 sentences with revised sentences that don’t contain that writing convention error. Vagueness

Example: The event put on by the city downtown was a wonderful, exciting event for the group of friends to attend together.

Redundancy

Example: It’s almost time for the United States presidential election again, when the citizens of America will go to the polls to choose their leader for the next four years.

Off-Topic

Example: Liberty Middle School, which is part of Hillsborough School District, one of the largest school districts in the country serving nearly 200, 000 students with several hundred schools, including a number of highly distinguished academic institutions, has over a thousand students served by more than a hundred teachers.

Wordiness

In so far as can be accommodated by the current administration, in the current socioeconomic climate prevailing at this time, and given the economic constraints constraining all fiscal measures, decisions, plans, proposals and agreements, the existing progressive economic levies under due consideration will be scaled back to remunerative levels consistent and in direct proportion with budgetary guidelines, recommendations, observations and conclusions. (Hint: “economic levies” are taxes)

Which sentence is written correctly? chicken a lean protein, can by prepared, in manyh chicken a lean protein can be prepared, in many he chicken, a lean protein, can be prepared in many he chicken, a lean, protein can be prepared in-sany he

Modernist poetry broke traditions in works that did all of the following except: question 1 options: a) experimented with language, symbolism, and imagery b) challenged rules about point of view, rhyme scheme, meter, and capitalization c) focused on the poem’s appearance on the page as a form of self-expression d) addressed subjects and ideas that had been explored in poetry for centuries. while mr. flood is not heroic in the typical sense and does nothing admirable during the poem’s action, robinson’s description of mr. flood is nevertheless filled with pathos, which a) the poem is filled with language and descriptions which arouse emotion, usually pity and sympathy, from the reader. b) the poem is filled with nonsensical events that make the reader laugh at mr. flood’s expense. c) the poem gives vivid sensory details that make the reader feel like they are a part of the story. d) the poem is tedious and drawn out with details that don’t influence the reader at all. refer to the william carlos williams poem "spring and all" (on pages 306-7 in your textbook), to answer the prompt below. your response should be 1-2 well-developed paragraphs and should include specific details (quotes) from the poem that support your analysis. cite your textual evidence as well. you should use your journeys book. because “spring and all” ends with language and imagery that suggest birth and growth, many readers consider it a hopeful poem that celebrates the first steps toward new life and away from a wintry world characterized by death and decay. consider the poem’s date of publication—1923—and the historical events that influenced many modern writers, specifically, world war i. poem below: by the road to the contagious hospital under the surge of the blue mottled clouds driven from the northeast-a cold wind. beyond, the waste of broad, muddy fields brown with dried weeds, standing and fallen patches of standing water the scattering of tall trees all along the road the reddish purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy stuff of bushes and small trees with dead, brown leaves under them leafless vines- lifeless in appearance, sluggish dazed spring approaches- they enter the new world naked, cold, uncertain of all save that they enter. all about them the cold, familiar wind- now the grass, tomorrow the stiff curl of wildcarrot leaf one by one objects are defined- it quickens: clarity, outline of leaf but now the stark dignity of entrance-still, the profound change has come upon them: rooted, they grip down and begin to awaken how might “spring and all” be interpreted as a reaction to the violence of world war 1? be sure to cite examples from the poem to support your analysis.

Which best identifies the figurative language used in this passage? cannon to right of them, cannon to left of them, cannon in front of them volley’d and thunder’d; storm’d at with shot and shell, boldly they rode and well, into the jaws of death, into the mouth of hell rode the six hundred.