Write your own sentences about the selection, using commas. Use the examples from “Into the Lifeboat” as models. When you have finished, share your sentences with a partner and explain each comma you used. Then, work together to identify places that a comma might make a sentence clearer. Revise your sentences as needed for clarity.

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Explanation:

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

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