Directions: Try to remember all the rules of editing dialogue, such as starting a new paragraph as the speaker changes, where quotation marks open and close, and punctuating dialogue. Try your best to edit this paragraph, and then we will check it together. Do not forget to submit the assignment, after we check it, so you can be sure to get any corrections that you missed! I told him Papa was fine and handed him the slip my grandpa had given him. “They sure are some fine-looking pups," he said. You'll have to go around to the door. I'm sure my feet never touched the ground as I flew around the building. He unlocked the door, and I stepped in, looking for my dogs. I couldn't see anything but boxes, barrels, old trunks, and some rolls of barbed wire. The kind stationmaster walked over to one of the boxes. Do you want the box and all he asked? I told him I did not want the box. All I wanted was the dogs. How are you going to carry them? he asked. I think they are a little too young to follow.
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