Please read and review my essay on If I could go anywhere in the world where would it be and give me input and things i should change to make it better, please and thank you, will mark brainliest Where in the world?

The world is a beautiful place, isn't it? There's oceans, mountains, plains and even beautiful forests! Out of all the options, where would you go? To japan with a lot of anime stores and anime themed places or Alaska where it’s very cold but you could live in an igloo? This question is quite hard to answer because your mind floods with ideas, right? Well, I have to say same because Japan seems awesome but also the Uk stands out or Ireland! But because for my love of hammerhead sharks and yes this is a bit cliché, I chose Monterey California. This magical place provides many scenic views and places to take your family and have a good time.

A Good place

I was attracted to this place because of Monterey Bay Aquarium. They have a wide variety of things to offer but what caught my eye was hammerhead sharks! They also offer sea turtles, stingrays, sharks, jellyfish and schools of fish. With 45 interactive exhibits that include reptiles, octopi, birds, fish and invertebrates! Though it is a bit costly you defiantly would get your money's worth. Not only is there an amazing aquarium but there are also a variety of places to eat and many more things to do there.

Cool Houses?

Wouldn’t you like to be in an entire neighborhood filled with mystic looking houses!? Well sadly you can't live in them but you can take a self-guided audio tour and learn all about the history of Carmel-by-the-Sea's Fairytale houses. These houses are rich in history. C'mon man I want to live in these really cool houses!

! Other attractions!

Yes, there’s definitely more like a Denis The Menace park! There is also a lovely tavern called Melville Tavern. There are many sites to see like the Lone Cypress and caves to explore. There are many amazing places to see and just be with your family and that’s exactly why I want to go.

Conclusion

In conclusion, if I could go anywhere, I would want it to be a place where my family could follow, where we all could do things, we enjoy and I do believe that this place is exactly that place. It offers many things for everyone of all ages to enjoy and that is what makes this place very lovely.