In this clip, students hold differing views on the same section of text: Is Tom's behavior manipulative or clever? How do the students respectfully
disagree with each other? How do they justify their own views in light of
the evidence presented?

The use of the hyphen should be reviewed.

Explanation:

The hyphen is used to join two ideas in a single paragraph. However, the fomra as the hyphen was used in the question aciam, does not promote the fluidity of the text and can generate confusion, especially in the beginning of the paragraph, where the sentences after the hyphen end up contradicting the information given in the first sentence of the paragraph. In addition, the hyphen is not promoting the connection between the beginning of the ceiling and the end. At the end of the text, the information after the hyphen does not appear to be linked to the information before the first hyphen.