11. "So he went on, tearing up all the flowers from the garden of his soul, and setting his heel upon them." (chapter 22)

12. "There is one kind of prison where the man is behind bars, and everything that he desires is
outside; and there is another kind where the things are behind the bars, and the man is out-
side." (chapter 27)
HI I NEED LITERARY DEVICE FOR ALL! pls

I really wish I could help but I need better explanation

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

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