Sentence structures to enhance the flow Which version best uses a variety
and writing style of a story?
A. Javi walked through the dark forest. He stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing "crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees. He walked on.
B. Javi walked through the dark forest, and he stepped on a dry twig.
It made an echoing "crack," and he looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on.
C. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig. It
made an echoing "crack." He looked left and right. He saw no
movement among the trees, so he walked on.
D. As he walked through the dark forest, Javi stepped on a dry twig.
Because it made an echoing "crack," he looked left and right. When
he saw no movement among the trees, he walked on.

For english i have to find 4 errors in each diary post

(1) fire extended humans’ geographical boundaries by allowing them to travel into regions that were previously too cold to explore. (2) it also kept predators away, allowing early humans to sleep securely. (3) fire, in fact, has been a significant factor in human development and progress in many ways. (4) other obvious benefits of fire are its uses in cooking and in hunting. (5) probably even more important, however, is that learning to control fire allowed people to change the very rhythm of their lives. (6) before fire, the human daily cycle coincided with the rising and setting of the sun. (7) with fire, though, humans gained time to think and talk about the day’s events and to prepare strategies for coping with tomorrow. the sentence that expresses the main idea is: (type the number of the sentence. then click “go.”)

Composition about "the day i ran away" with 500 words