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QUESTION 12 How could the following paragraph be improved?
• Jack and Jill ran. They ran up the hill. Then, they fell down, Jack hurt his leg Luckily, it did not break. After that, jack went home.
They did not run up the hill again.
By fixing the run-on sentences
By fixing the fragments
By varying sentence length
By varying sentence beginnings
How could the following paragraph be improved

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• Jack and Jill ran. They ran up...

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