English, 03.03.2021 08:10 Josephcastillo5246

So i wrote this poem. Could u pls rate it?? Also could u tell me if its good or bad? :)
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The fate of the world is in their hands.

The fate of the world is in their hands.
One chance to unite, everything to lose.
Night and fog, hardly seen.
The dice is on the carpet,
But we’ll get through this together.
The cross of lorraine,
Ment freedom to us.
But shall we receive it, nor not.

Hiding in a dog house, As my mother had told me.
Those Germans had taken my mother away.
Her last words for me to go somewhere safe and don't come for her.
But will I listen?
No, I will come and save you. Just wait.
Now I must take her place and become the spy myself.
We are in the resistance, so I will resist.

Losing everything I have to free my mom.
But the only way I could do that, is to find the Maquis.
Time to act, to show the real me.
I’m tired of pretending.
Switching stations. To save my life.
Sabotaging trains, railroads.
Finally the day shall come when i will be reunited with my mama.
The fate of the world is in their hands.

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