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English, 28.02.2021 03:00 nickykardashian

Im writing a small story can you think of any corrections to this, also what do you think? Lost In A Dream

¨Let there be light¨ said the little man and because he willed it so. Nothing happened. For the man had not the power nor the will to make light appear. He sat up in his bed and chuckled. "It would be nice to have that power, haha." He moved his soft, dark blue blanket off of his legs. He then swung his feet off the bed and looked around the room, trying to remember where he was, it had a dim light coming in from the window. He looks at his bedside table to the right of the bed. It's a small wooden table with a drawer that almost reaches the ground, there is a gap below big enough for his slippers to go. There's a glass of water, half empty; a remote to his small black tv across the room, his dark blue phone, with galaxy paint on the back, charging at 98 percent. Then he has a small black  alarm clock and the numbers are flashing and displaying 3:42Am. "Cr4p it happened again.." He taps the top of it to turn it off "D4m□ these power outages" He then moves on to the calendar hanging crookedly on the wall, he didn't have another nail to fix it with. 

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