Narrative Organizer Part One Directions: First, choose a topic. Choose a Topic: Before What happened before the story in "The Cask of Amontillado?" or After What happened after the story in "The Cask of Amontillado?" Next, complete the graphic organizer by adding details to each section so that you are planning the details for your narrative essay. Graphic Organizer Beginning Middle End Part Two Directions: Write the introduction for your narrative essay, following the guidelines you were taught. The introduction should be approximately 150-200 words in length and may include dialogue. Part Three Directions: Write the body of your narrative essay. This portion should be approximately 600-800 words in length and include dialogue and sensory details. Be sure to follow the tips and guidelines provided in the lessons. Part Four Directions: Choose one passage (200-250 words) of your narrative essay to rewrite, adding descriptive language and sensory details wherever possible. Highlight your revisions. Submissions without highlighting will be returned for revisions. Highlight Your Revisions help plz i really need help i need the answer for this asap plz help ill give 20 points and mark you plz.

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mrs. mallard has a heart condition, which means that if she's startled she could die. so, when news comes that her husband's been killed in an accident, the people who tell her have to cushion the blow.

mrs. mallard's sister josephine sits down with her and dances around the truth until mrs. mallard finally understands what happened. the deceased mr. mallard's friend, richards, hangs out with them for moral support.

richards originally found out because he had been in the newspaper headquarters when a report of the accident that killed mr. mallard, which happened on a train, came through. richards waited for proof from a second source before going to the mallards' to share the news.

when mrs. mallard finds out what happened she acts differently from most women in the same position, who might disbelieve it. she cries passionately before deciding to go to her room to be by herself.

in her room, mrs. mallard sits down on a comfy chair and feels completely depleted. she looks out the window and looks out at a world that seems alive and fresh. she can see the sky coming between the rain clouds.

mrs. mallard sits still, occasionally crying briefly like a kid might.

the narrator describes her as youthful and pretty, but because of this news she looks preoccupied and absent.

she seems to be holding out for some kind of unknown news or knowledge, which she can tell is approaching.

mrs. mallard breathes heavily and tries to resist before succumbing to this unknown thing, which is a feeling of freedom.

acknowledging freedom makes her revive, and she doesn't consider whether she should feel bad about it.

mrs. mallard thinks to herself about how she'll cry when she sees her husband's dead body and how much he loved her. even so, she's kind of excited about the chance to make her own decisions and not feel accountable to anyone.

mrs. mallard feels even more swept up by the idea of freedom than the fact that she had felt love for her husband.

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