Word bank: manage, checking account, debit card, fees, account balance, overdraft fees
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Introduction and claim
This is/is not
Evidence 1:
states,
The author says/states
The article says/states
Reasoning 1:
This matters because
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Paragraph 2
Claim
Another reason why this is/is not
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This matters because
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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

government played the key role in promoting industrialization in russia while individual businesses played a larger role in great britain. or for apex a