Open the Notebook tool () and read the first draft of your memoir from a different perspective to make it better. Copy the draft and paste it below. Then use the methods outlined here to improve your writing. Add sensory words to your descriptions. Refer to this resource to find suitable sensory words.
Mark the verbs in your sentences. Use a thesaurus to replace weaker verbs with strong, specific verbs.
Rewrite some sentences using dialogue instead of description.
Look for sentences where using a simile will strengthen your writing.
Write three new beginning sentences for your memoir and select the best one.

the correct answer is d. in john paston's letter written friday, 14, 1476, he expresses his fear that he may have to go to war.

indeed, although the black death was ravaging europe, the pastons were relatively safe from it due to their social status as they were part of the landed gentry. it is clear that the vast majority of the victims of the pandemic were the poor. the reason why he is weary of having to go to war is because at the particular time england was also devastated by the war of the roses and paston, being a courtesan was inevitably involved.

i do not see anyy sentence you are asking for me to read

i believe it’s the first one, but it could be the second! not the third or fourth.

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