There are 8 comma errors Dear mom I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent the backstroke play foursquare and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond Virginia and Michael is from Cleven land Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday:June 23 2009. Anyway I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.
Your son
Jack

Dear mom

I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent the backstroke play foursquare and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond Virginia and Michael is from Cleven land Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday:June 23 2009. Anyway I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.

Your son

Jack

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Dear Mom,

I have had a really good time at camp. I have learned how to pitch a tent, the backstroke, play foursquare, and use a compass. I have also met many new friends. Alex is from Richmond, Virginia and Michael is from Cleveland, Ohio. Michael and I have the same exact same birthday: June 23, 2009. Anyway, I still have two more weeks to go. There is a big celebration here on Independence Day. I hope everyone is doing great at home. I will see you soon.

Your son,

Jack

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)