Any advanced writers out there? I need some input. This story is a continuation of The Cask of Amontillado by Edgar Allen Poe. "How lonely a man would be with no spouse, nor comrade. A lack of companionship, a lack of interaction. That man is I. But still; the revenge that was forced upon the man that mocked and injured me, a thousand times, is still stirring. The deed that was done, has not left my mind. It can’t rest. Only once it had. Dearest Viventium fell and passed … the woman was one thing I truly cherished.
I felt sick. It was the walls; the cold, dark, dripping walls. Nothing more.
My son Filius and his family came to visit me, in a surprise ambush. I had not seen Filius since his mother died. I wasn’t prepared for their arrival at all. Everyone in town remembers me as the lonely old man, so when word got around that my son was staying, the town's people were a little shocked."
How would I continue this story? I don't want you to write the rest, I just want some feedback and ideas.