I’ll give you the brainliest if u tell me whether or not my thesis statement is good or not and how i can fix it!! Loneliness affects peoples’ choices and behaviors because of the way a person is treated by others.

it sounds good i can relate to it

Explanation:

instead of repeating the word person use the word "they"

End Result:

Loneliness affects peoples’ choices and behaviors because of the way they are treated by others.

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answer:

he goes to check on the brigid

explanation: