**JOURNALISM QUESTIONS** pls help me! 1. what strategies can you use to go from the planning stage to the drafting stage?
2. how are revising and editing different?
3. why is taking a break important to the revising process?

hey! thanks for the question.

from planning to drafting, i'd suggest doing research and knowing what you're going to talk about. organize it properly, maybe by cause and effect, or a timeline, ect. make sure the order makes sense and flows correctly.

revising is usually more like fixing the rough draft, and organizing it so it goes smoothly. editting is the final draft, in which you make it sound better.

taking a break is important because you need to get evidence, and read examples, which you can do while resting your fingers from writing.

make sure to rephrase this when answering :)

jim mohr

explanation:

the narrator is a first person, participant one, who describes in the simple past tense important and difficult events in his earlier life. he also provides temporal markers as the month (january) and the time (12: 30 pm). finally the account of his experience is very detailed, to the extent that a participant narrator would talk the same way about his experiences. a good example of such detail is the mention of the “bovril ration” which historically was a native american food adopted by european explorers in arctic and antarctic regions due to its high level of calories.