Narrative Writing: Removing Irrelevant Details paragraph below has one sentence that is not relevant to the narrative. wright out that sentence to strengthen the paragraph. It was a crisp autumn morning, and Quinn and her mother were exploring the local farmers market. Her mother's eye-catching red scarf danced in the breeze as they strolled through the market, buying some crusty bread here, a few vegetables there. Quinn followed along, picking her way through the crowd admiring how the trees had turned into multicolored works of art. This past summer had been the hottest one on record. Suddenly Quinn realized she didn't see her mother anywhere She scanned the crowd, hoping to catch a glimpse of her mother's bright red scarf.