If you had written the book (TKAM) which part would you have written differently? Explain how you would have written it and how it would have made a difference in the story.

Answer and Explanation:

If I had written TKAM, I would change the sentence given to Tom, because I believe that this would give the reader some comfort and allow the good to win and justice to be done fairly and correctly. However, I understand that this ending is not realistic and that it would not make the book have the same impact that it has and that made it such an important book in our society. I believe that my change would provoke an idealized and unrealistic story, which would give people a wrong view of how racist and intolerant our society is.

i believe it is he has been given the drum as a joke.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.