Dylan wrote the following sentence for his research paper on giraffes: The wide Savannah is roamed by tall, graceful giraffes.

His teacher told him to revise this sentence so that it is more appropriate for formal writing. Explain to Dylan how to revise the sentence.

Constructed response paragraph: after reading “the case for short words,” do you think the author makes a convincing case that short words are effective? explain your answer and support it with evidence from the selection.

Itscome to our attention that someone has been taking extra supply out of the supply cabinet for some time now and this is not allowed the officer manager says if this continues to happen we will have to put up security cameras this will come out of the office budget there for our paychecks make sure that you're only using me budget for the for your department

Which is these is not a benefit of parallel structure? a)clarity b)classification c)emphasis d)balance