I need this done in like less that 30 mins BUSINESS LETTER!!!

Using your letter from the project "Business Letters," check it against the rubric. To receive credit, select your score and write one paragraph justifying the grade you have given yourself. If your score is not a 3 or higher, you must revise your letter as well.

Business Letter Analysis Rubric

A "4" on this letter means that. . . You have followed the form and structure outlined in the prompt. Your letter addresses the specific information outlined in the prompt. You have used correct grammar and spelling.

A "3" on this letter means that. . .Your letter contains one or two minor errors in terms of structure and form, but they are not distracting. Your letter addresses the specific information from the prompt, but you may have missed one or two minor details. You may have made one or two minor errors in grammar and spelling, but they are not distracting.

A "2" on this letter means that. . .Your letter contains one or two minor errors in terms of structure and form, and they are distracting. Your letter addresses most of the specific information from the prompt, but you are missing some details. You have made errors in grammar and spelling, but your work is still readable.

A "1" on this letter means that. . .Your letter is incorrectly formatted or missing parts entirely. Your letter does not address the specific information from the prompt. You have made numerous errors in grammar and spelling and your work is difficult to read.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.