Some people have brought up cooking. Food preparation is a skill that students will use throughout their lives. For example, Youth Focus
magazine reports that early culinary education is likely to help young
adults live independently, reduce expenses, and even offer meals to
friends and family. But the benefits of cooking classes go beyond
learning to chop, mix, and sauté. In addition to building these skills,
cooking lessons offer hands-on experiences that can help students
understand other subjects such as nutrition, chemistry, and even math.
Furthermore, classes can help break down boundaries by introducing
students to foods from other cultures. Perhaps most importantly,
though, cooking classes bring students together because they are fun
- and, of course, the results are delicious.
How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance
style?
O A. Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas.
O B. Maintain a formal style.
O C. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence,
OD. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly.