Add the apostrophe which is missing to the extract below.

jim's gym

we have arrange of state-of-the-at equipment for cardio-vascular workout and muscle building. we also had a 20 metre pool and a spa. every week we run 10 classes ranging from relaxing yoga and pilates to high- energy body pump. if you're looking for a personal training programme, we have a team of six excellent personal trainers with a combined 50 years' experience between them. after using our facilities ,you can complete your experience with a meal or a drink in our members-onlycafe.

There are no apostrophes missing.

Apostrophes should mainly be used to make words possessive and to make contractions.  After carefully reviewing this extract, three instances where apostrophes would be needed are present—two possessives and one contraction.  All three instances already have the apostrophe in the appropriate place.  “Jim’s” has the apostrophe in the correct location for the possessive form of “Jim.”  Also in the correct location is the apostrophe for “years’” as “years’” is the plural possessive form of “year.”  And, “you’re” has the apostrophe in the correct location indicating the contraction for “you” and “are.”  Again, upon review of the excerpt provided, there were no missing apostrophes.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p

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