Informative Essay on Women empowerment how should I start it ?
(Hook)

There was a time where women were not aloud to do various things that men were allowed to do. Multiple women worked very hard for women to be as equal as they are right now. Although things could be worse for women it could also be a lot worse.

Explanation:

answer; /// (the anagnorisis )

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.