Hi, may you please REVIEW this informative paragraph on book the first a tale of two cities? here is the paragraph outline that my teacher requires us to use. below the outline is my paragraph. I HAVE COMPLETED THE PARAGRAPH I JUST WANT SOMEONE TO PROOFREAD IT! She always tells me that I don't follow her outline so that's why I included it. topic sentence

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Mr. Lorry went on a rescue mission for his client from the Tellsons bank, Mr. Manette. This mission contained numerous means to be successful. First and foremost, Mr. Lorry got a letter on his approach to Dover that read " Wait at Dover for mam'selle" (Dickens 14). Mr. Lorry at that point answered this letter with Recalled to life which is rather peculiar. He wishes to educate mam'selle about somebody who is destined to be Recalled to life in the city of Dover. Furthermore, Mr. Lorry arrives at Dover and should educate mam'selle (otherwise known as Miss Manette) about the individual who is destined to be reviewed to life. Mr. Lorry at that point advises her in the structure regarding a story, that her dad "has been discovered... he is alive" (Dickens 14). Miss Manette was unimaginably shaken. She was anxious about the possibility that her dad was extremely changed from being in jail for a very long time. She at that point goes with him to la Basteille where her dad is being held. Ultimately, Mr. Lorry and Miss Manette show up at the Basteille. When they showed up at the jail cell, a "white-haired man" was uncovered (Dickens 21). Mr. Lorry and Miss Manette at that point snuck the changed Mr. Manette out of la Basteille with the assistance of a couple of others. As you can see, although the rescue mission was exceptionally long and troublesome, Mr. Manette was removed from the Basteille.