MARKING AS BRANLIST which example is part of the editing process A Cali changes her thesis statement after she decides to include some new information in an essay
B Trina add more evidence to a second paragraph in order to better support the topic sentence
C Jacob adds background information to his introductory paragraph to better connect his hook and thesis statement
D Davion carefully read this paper over again, fixing any spelling or grammar errors that he comes across

Read the excerpt from "politics and the english language" by george orwell. by this morning’s post i have received a pamphlet dealing with conditions in germany. the author tells me that he "felt impelled” to write it. i open it at random, and here is almost the first sentence that i see: "[the allies] have an opportunity not only of achieving a radical transformation of germany’s social and political structure in such a way as to avoid a nationalistic reaction in germany itself, but at the same time of laying the foundations of a cooperative and unified europe.” which statement is correct? orwell uses an example and statistical evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses an example and a quotation for evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and factual evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and statistical evidence in this excerpt.