2. Read the following scenario and answer the question that follows. You have agreed to write out directions for your award-winning chocolate chip cookies for a classmate who has never baked cookies before.
Who is the target audience of your document?
O A skilled baker who only needs an overview of the steps.
O A skilled baker who will need directions and tips for baking.
O A beginner baker who will need detailed steps and directions.
O A beginner baker who will only need an overview of the steps and directions.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.