HELP identity the error and correct it
1)Mr. Mason owns three two bedroom apartment in Michigan

Mr. Mason owns three, two-bedroom apartments in Michigan.

it ends with a marriage, but also with prospero giving up his power.

the tempest is a play written by william shakespeare between 1610-1611, it narrates the story of prospero a magician that sets a storm to wreck a ship, this sets the story to kill the king of naples. while it is a romantic style play, it isn´t traditional because of the ending, it end with the marriage and the magician giving up his powers.

"rodney quicklt turned away and darted into a crowed of student" i thinks thats it but idk