PLEASE REVISE THIS GODLY but simple This is the story of a kid named Matthew deCardenas he is the legendary hero spiderman and is in high school where he's about to go on a field trip, here is his origin.

I went to school but then they told us we were going on a field trip to a lab. I went to the lab with my friends there. There was a mysterious big 13 foot tall man in a coat watching that room standing across the haul. He seemed very angry for some reason. So then i went into a lab test room and i saw so many cool potions but then a spider bit me it hurt but it felt like i had gained strength and other weird abilities.

My power got weirder, like my hands started shooting out webs but I got used to them but some big 13 feet tall evil looking guy approached me. He looked like the guy in the coat. He saw my powers and was amazed but then he said he wanted my power and proceeded to send guards at me, the guards were no problem fighting but then i heard that big guy powering something up… , machine guns were spraying at me like crazy i got a little hurt but not too much. I ran away by swinging across buildings. When i got home i knew i had to figure out how to defeat him because he said he would kill my family if i didn't give him my power or get killed by him

I did some research on the guy his name is actually Kingpin. I also figured out there is a big glass chandelure on the top of his office i knew this can be my time to strike him down

So i went to his office and he immediately started shooting again but this time i jumped and taunted him he was very very mad so he started running towards me right under the chandelure i hit the chandelure with my webs and the whole glass roof top fell right on top of him before his eyes he knew he was doomed and then he got majorly injured and sent to jail because apparently he was also mayor of the city and was terrorizing people so he went to jail. I was relieved to see my dad and mom or any one in my family was not dead or hurt from this evil man.