Can someone tweak this thesis statement to make it sound more professional (I'm in 9th grade so don't make it too good that it seems like I didn't write it)... Due to society’s unrealistic expectations and the constant “failures” faced in life, resilience is the only thing that pushes us forward.

Which detail from the text best demonstrates the effect of totalitarianism on the animals? "progress was made in the dry frosty weather that followed." "it had been decided to build the walls three feet thick." "they were always cold, and usually hungry as well." "for a long time the quarry was full of snowdrifts and nothing could be done."