I had to write an ending to this short story. The short story is the images attached.

The ending I wrote

"After a lot of terrifying dreams and even more thoughts filt with jealousy the princess made her decision. When she was sitting next to her father, the king, she looked upon the man she loved and he looked back at her with the question of “which door?” and she answered him by making a slight quick movement to the right. When he walked up and opened the door the princess watched his face light up when he saw the lady with flushing cheeks, and eyes full of sparkling triumph. The princess could not stand the sight of watching them get married so she got up and left. She went to her room with eyes full of tears, feeling unsure if she made the right choice. She made up a plan that would either make her lover resent her or return to her ready for whatever her father might throw at him. She then put her plan into action. She snuck out her bedroom window and took off towards the village. When she reached the village she went to the man that managed the market. “Do you sell poison? I heard that you do.” the princess asked. “Yes... I do, but please don’t arrest me!” replied the man. “I would like to buy some how much?” asked the princess. “5 silver coins.” replied the man. She then bought the poison and champaign from the man. When she left the market she put the poison into the champaign and went to the house of her lover and told him not to drink it, that it is only for the lady. The next day the lady was found dead and the princess told her lover what she did. Her lover then resented her and turned the princess in to her father. "

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In just over one hundred years, between 1701 and 1810, 252,500 enslaved africans were brought to barbados—an island that occupies only 166 square miles (making it, today, one of the smallest countries in the world). the english then set out to conquer more sugar islands, starting with jamaica, which they took from spain in 1655. in the same period that the 252,500 africans were brought to barbados, 662,400 africans were taken to jamaica. thus, sugar drove more than 900,000 people into slavery, across the atlantic, to barbados and jamaica—and these were just two of the sugar islands. the english were eagerly filling antigua, nevis, saint kitts, and montserrat with slaves and sugar mills. they took over much of dutch guiana for the same reason. seeing the fortunes being made in sugar, the french started their own scramble to turn the half of the island of hispaniola that they controlled (which is now haiti), as well as martinique, guadeloupe, and french guiana (along the south american coast near dutch guiana), into their own sugar colonies, which were filled with hundreds of thousands more african slaves. by 1753, british ships were taking average of 34,250 slaves from africa every year, and by 1768, that number had reached 53,100. –sugar changed the world, marc aronson and marina budhos how do the authors use historical evidence to support their claim? x(a) they use secondary sources to show how french and english monarchs were indifferent to enslaved people. x(b)they use secondary sources to show that enslaved people often fought for their freedom after arriving in the caribbean. the answer is: (c)they use facts from primary sources to show how countries increased the number of enslaved people to produce more sugar. x(d)they use primary source interviews to show that countries could make more money in trading sugar without using enslaved people.