In 3-5 sentences, describe the relationship between Dana and Roy, using specific examples from the text. What are they like when they are together? From Hoot

my bad lil sis i promise tori

hi,   i believe the outlines that were supposed to be showing at the sentences, are not. could you highlight them somehow?

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.