A good essay will: Be at least 200 words in length and contain at least five paragraphs Contain a good thesis statement with a "so what" Contain three supporting ideas Finish with a strong conclusion Contain evidence from the primary source (the novel) Have few grammar and spelling mistakes

i guess you are missing the idea that has to be supported, am i right?

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.