What is Franklin's angle or point in giving us these
particular details of his first
visit to Philadelphia?
(See Sec. 5.)
A. Franklin's point is that he should have
made arrangements for lodging before he
took his trip.
B. Franklin's point is that he was poor and
alone the first time he went to Philadelphia.
C. Franklin's point is that Philadelphia is a
dìrty city and doesnt take care of its poor.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone