What is the purpose of lines between ideas (also called “spokes”) in a web outline? to make a reader’s job less confusing
to help a writer identify contrasting ideas
to identify thoughts that contradict the main idea
to show how ideas are related to each other

Is the following statement true or false? the topic sentence of a paragraph should indicate what the paragraph is going to be about. false true

On her zoo blog, bindi describes the experience of walking the red carpet with her mum that evening, and the unmatched joy of what happened soon after. “all the categories came up, but then mine did! they said all these top actresses' names then my name! the guy said 'and the winner is . . ’ . . my heart stopped . . ‘bindi irwin! ’ i could not believe it, i won! i was amazed, in tears, i could hardly talk! i’ll never forget that great trip! ” what does the hyperbole in the excerpt the reader understand about bindi? she had a medical problem. she was extremely frightened. she became very excited. she won an important award.

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?