NO SPAM OR FALSE ANSWERS I NEED HELP BEFORE I TURN IT IN its a poem i made for an assignment but i need critiqing (cant spell) ok its pt two to my other one so read that first ...is the real villian me

this tightness in my chest i feel i cant breathe

gasping for air i reach fr the sink

i think im sick could it be me

it makes no sense im always so nice

i never let them break me

but is it right do i just lie to hide the real feelings inside

i grab a knife maybe if i just die

to be countinued but need critiqing plz help