15 points!! In the beginning of the story, Greg is focused on playing basketball for the Scorpions. His father wants him to study harder and lectures him about the importance of doing well in school. Which revision should the student make to improve the flow of ideas in this paragraph?

she was killed in her home during hurricane katrina. b.she was relocated to another town after hurricane katrina. c.she died trying to get victims of the hurricane to safety. d.she is still missing — police do not know where she is.

i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.

a: that she is losing interest in her relationship with arobin just took !

peace, morning, sun glooming, sorrow, woe pardon’d, punished, more hence, talk, story. all of these three words have to do something with a depressed, regretful tone. woe is another word for misery, heartache, so all of these words are about unhappy feelings.