1. In the text field below, write a first draft of your critique based on your outline and notes. Your critique should be at least 400 words long. 2. After a break, reread what you have written. Make any corrections in content that seem necessary. Then check your work for errors, looking at these areas:

He had fished in the river since ten years and he was a good fisherman. he know where to found the slim sliver chilwa fish, a big beautiful mahseer and the long moustache singhara. he know where the river was deep but where it is shallow; he knew which baits to use - which fish like worms and which liked gram. edit the above