What is the most effective way to revise sentence 6? A Each day the penguins that leave their burrows head out to sea for spending the day swimming and
feeding
B Each day the penguins head out to sea to spend the day swimming and feeding, leaving their burrows.
C Each day the penguins leave their burrows they head out to sea to spend the day swimming and feeding.
D Each day the penguins leave their burrows and head out to sea to spend the day swimming and feeding,
(5) Thousands of tiny fairy penguins nest in burrows along the shoreline of
Australia. (6) Each day the penguins leave their burrows, and out to sea they head
to spend the day swimming and feeding. (7) But in the late 1990s and early 2000s,
a number of oil spills in the region threatened the very existence of these birds.
(8) Experts tried to help, but they couldn't get to all the birds fast enough. (9) Some
penguins would try to groom themselves. (10) They swallowed the toxic oil and
died. (11) Knits for Nature formulated a unique plan. (12) They asked volunteers to
knit sweaters for the penguins to wear (13) The sweaters would not only protect the
birds from the oil but would also keep them warm while they waited for their turn to
be cleaned.

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Read this paragraph from chapter 5 of the prince. there are, for example, the spartans and the romans. the spartans held athens and thebes, establishing there an oligarchy: nevertheless they lost them. the romans, in order to hold capua, carthage, and numantia, dismantled them, and did not lose them. they wished to hold greece as the spartans held it, making it free and permitting its laws, and did not succeed. so to hold it they were compelled to dismantle many cities in the country, for in truth there is no safe way to retain them otherwise than by ruining them. and he who becomes master of a city accustomed to freedom and does not destroy it, may expect to be destroyed by it, for in rebellion it has always the watchword of liberty and its ancient privileges as a rallying point, which neither time nor benefits will ever cause it to forget. and whatever you may do or provide against, they never forget that name or their privileges unless they are disunited or dispersed, but at every chance they immediately rally to them, as pisa after the hundred years she had been held in bondage by the florentines. what idea is stressed in the passage? the desire for liberty the establishment of an oligarchy the dismantling of an acquired state the tendency toward rebellion